*might be a spelling mistake there...
Hehe. It looks fine to me.
I suggest the public impression of all RAF pilots with F/O Kite moustaches is wrong. I think, at least where basic training was concerned, that much of it was carried out by civilian instructors at the Elementary Flying Training Schools. The DH Flying School at White Waltham, another one run by Phillips & Powis at Woodley & (of course) Marshall's of Cambridge spring to mind. http://www.f4aviation.co.uk/Hangar/2002/marshall/marshall.htm
I was rather surprised the pupils were in the front seat on the Tiger Moth. When I worked for Cecil Pashley* at the Southern Aero Club back in the 60s they always flew from the rear seat right from the start. When they were ready to go solo the instructor could get out & let them go. The Tiger is always flown solo from the rear seat.
* PS. Arguably the most experienced flying instructor in the world at that time. He taught RFC & RN pilots during WWI & RAF, FAA pilots in WWII.