thats better, a tad far back on the zoom for a single prop but thats the idea
here is a quick and dirty one... i dont have time to be artistic and I am online and surfing while flying so my frames are a bit low
I usually try to get the city and the airport in line with each other to find out just how much of a drag the setting have on me

In that shot I have the city, Boeing and KSEA all in one line
The clouds/weather do not make things easier, only a larger load