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Postby Double_Farvel » Tue May 01, 2007 4:51 pm

Well...what do you think?
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Re: Rip This!

Postby ThatOnePerson » Tue May 01, 2007 4:54 pm

Besides using the same paint and cut out, it looks good. I would have used to different paints and screens though.
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Re: Rip This!

Postby matt2190 » Tue May 01, 2007 6:08 pm

The aircraft look very nice. Although I do not like the clouds.
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Re: Rip This!

Postby cspyro21 » Wed May 02, 2007 2:40 am

I love it! :o

However, as Monkey said, different paints would have bee cool. 8-)
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Re: Rip This!

Postby Mr.Mugel » Wed May 02, 2007 6:58 am

Quite nice, but

- Prop blades, they are perfectly round in your case, they are too wide, make them match the perspective, the one of the plane in the background is way to small
- The plane has a leather headcap for the pilot, would suit better
- As said before, use different paits, there must be nearly 50 paints out for this bird...
- Check the cut at the tanks, there is no need to do it perfect with stuff in the background, but the pods play an important role in this pic, as they make a big part of the lighting
- In this case it
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Re: Rip This!

Postby krigl » Wed May 02, 2007 7:36 am

It's all been pretty much said, good and bad - I like the composition with the spacing and angle, really classic look to it.  :)

Did you blur the clouds when you blurred the second plane?

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Re: Rip This!

Postby jankees » Thu May 03, 2007 11:58 am

Ha, Mustangs!

I like the general composition, it gives a good impression of the two planes banking, but the cutting is a bit edgy, especially on the tanks, and as has been mentioned before, the paints should have been different. If you are aiming for a WWII shot, it should have been similar (same squadron), but slightly different, if post war/modern, it should have completely different.
I do not understand why the second plane should be blurry, they are moving at almost the same speed I assume, and are both a fair distance away, so in my mind, both should have been in focus. Same is true for the clouds. I like the idea of being above the clouds, but these ones look very strange, too strange really...
I am also not convinced by the propellors, but I do like the fact that they have different positions.

Anyway, that's my input, great choice of planes, did I mention that?
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Re: Rip This!

Postby Double_Farvel » Thu May 03, 2007 1:59 pm

I now consider this pic ripped... ;)
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