by jankees » Thu May 03, 2007 11:58 am
Ha, Mustangs!
I like the general composition, it gives a good impression of the two planes banking, but the cutting is a bit edgy, especially on the tanks, and as has been mentioned before, the paints should have been different. If you are aiming for a WWII shot, it should have been similar (same squadron), but slightly different, if post war/modern, it should have completely different.
I do not understand why the second plane should be blurry, they are moving at almost the same speed I assume, and are both a fair distance away, so in my mind, both should have been in focus. Same is true for the clouds. I like the idea of being above the clouds, but these ones look very strange, too strange really...
I am also not convinced by the propellors, but I do like the fact that they have different positions.
Anyway, that's my input, great choice of planes, did I mention that?