Feeder...

[krigl]

Thanks for the comments everyone...I'll try to improve

Yeah, you do that!  :D
Not sure how though, good luck trying...

[Fly2e]

Posted by: Ashar Posted on: Today at 6:36am
Thanks for the comments everyone...I'll try to improve

Try to improve, why?
Each person has their own creative perspective.


Each person has their own style...
That is why it is called art!

Being different is what separates people from the rest and gives the individual their own style and or trademark!


Great shots Ashar!

Dave

[ramsa329]

I agree with Dave on this one as far as the part where each person has to create their own art.

Ashar's shots are clear and interesting and he obviously loves the plane!!!! Which is all excellent.

However if you use an effect too much it takes away from the surprise.

Maybe trying to mix some shots that are not extreme with the extreme shots will break up the set into even a more surprising and interesting story.

Also try to adjust your sight distance in user defined weather which will add some control to the long flat spaces and create some interesting haze effects.

All in all a good job Ashar

[Tweek]

Maybe trying to mix some shots that are not extreme with the extreme shots will break up the set into even a more surprising and interesting story.

Definitely. It can become a little disorientating when every shot is tilted at an unusually large angle! Try rotating the frame at the same angle as the aircraft is to the horizon, i.e. if you're in a 20 degree bank, rotate the camera 20 degrees, be it with the turn, or against the turn. See how that turns out

With this picture, I've rotated the image along the horizon, against the original angle of the wings. This compliments the aircraft rotation, without going too overboard.
Sorry about the size, it had to be cropped