My first Composite

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My first Composite

Postby Mazza » Fri Oct 16, 2009 7:57 am

Tell me what you think  ;)

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Re: My first Composite

Postby ShaneG_old » Fri Oct 16, 2009 8:05 am

The lighting on the plane is wrong, but aside from that, this is a very well put together piece Mazza. [smiley=thumbsup.gif]

Nice choice of aircraft for the background, and a very nice background pic as well. The black & white motif works very well in this shot.
Great job on the cutout also, very neat & clean job. 8-)
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Re: My first Composite

Postby Mazza » Fri Oct 16, 2009 8:06 am

The lighting on the plane is wrong, but aside from that, this is a very well put together piece Mazza. [smiley=thumbsup.gif]

Nice choice of aircraft for the background, and a very nice background pic as well. The black & white motif works very well in this shot.
Great job on the cutout also, very neat & clean job. 8-)


Thanks, yeah the B&W was too make the plane look better  ;D

I grabbed an old random shot and did this just to try it! I like it!
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Re: My first Composite

Postby gtirob01 » Fri Oct 16, 2009 10:13 am

As Shane said, the lighting is not right for the shot... but overall it is a very good effort. The b&w definitely adds to the shot!
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Re: My first Composite

Postby patchz » Fri Oct 16, 2009 4:25 pm

[color=#000000]Yeah, I like it too. Pretty good for your first. If you did it in layers and still have the layered file, you could try adjusting the contrast and light on the plane. Even if you don't have it in layers, you could just select the plane and do the same. I look forward to more composites from you.
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Re: My first Composite

Postby RaptorF22 » Fri Oct 16, 2009 5:42 pm

The plane is nosing down a little too much, nut otherwise a great shot!
Here is a quick edit of the pic I did, although I could not do much to make the plane nose up.
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Re: My first Composite

Postby EJW » Fri Oct 16, 2009 5:43 pm

Very nice edit! ;)
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Re: My first Composite

Postby Mazza » Fri Oct 16, 2009 8:50 pm

Thanks guys! ;)
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Re: My first Composite

Postby Leigh » Fri Oct 16, 2009 9:49 pm

Its good mazz for a first time :D

yer the lighting is off and without the sun and shadows you cant tell when the light is coming from.

im guessing its coming from behind the tree.

also a prop could help the plane come out of the dive :P
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Re: My first Composite

Postby Mazza » Fri Oct 16, 2009 11:21 pm

Its good mazz for a first time :D

yer the lighting is off and without the sun and shadows you cant tell when the light is coming from.

im guessing its coming from behind the tree.

also a prop could help the plane come out of the dive :P


It's SPINNING SO FAST YOU CAN'T EVEN SEE IT!!!!!!!!! :D :D :D :D :D :D


And the light on the 'real shot' is coming from behind the tree and from the sim I don't know  ;D ;D ;D ;D
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