CRJ700 taking off

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CRJ700 taking off

Postby BrandonF » Wed Jul 29, 2009 8:40 pm

I know it could be better, but I am still learning special effects.

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What do you think?


IMAGE EDITED: now the lights are not so bright.
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Re: CRJ700 taking off

Postby skoker » Wed Jul 29, 2009 8:41 pm

Make the lights smaller and it should be good.
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Re: CRJ700 taking off

Postby Brando14100 » Wed Jul 29, 2009 8:49 pm

Make the lights smaller and it should be good.

That's the biggest problem I see as well. In the future, try to include some scenery or weather to make it more interesting. Also, try not to use the defalt paint jobs.

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Re: CRJ700 taking off

Postby EJW » Thu Jul 30, 2009 6:31 am

Really nice. Maybe make the heat wave a little more random as it looks a little too uniform. Great shot!
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Re: CRJ700 taking off

Postby cantflywontfly » Thu Jul 30, 2009 1:02 pm

really like the shot and angle, and love the smoke effects too!

one thing bugs me though...

i've heard of belly landings, but belly take-offs?!
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