My first composite!

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My first composite!

Postby SubZer0 » Sat Jul 25, 2009 12:21 am

Hello everyone. After losing in the first round of the Head2Head competition (to a composite),
and after seeing all the composites entered, I decided to take up the art myself. Here goes...!

I took the beaver from a shot I recently took flying in Alaska, and the image from somewhere online.




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Please give me your HONEST feedback. Don't be afraid.. this is
my first composite edit ever and I WANT to learn. Thanks!
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Re: My first composite!

Postby Leigh » Sat Jul 25, 2009 12:27 am

Its very nice

but prop a prop would do :D

also the shadowing but i think that would come later once you've learnt how to do it
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Re: My first composite!

Postby SubZer0 » Sat Jul 25, 2009 12:30 am

Its very nice

but prop a prop would do :D

also the shadowing but i think that would come later once you've learnt how to do it

Ah crap I totally forgot about the prop... I kept reminding myself as I worked on the rest of the image but I was so excited to have it done that I forgot it  ;D ;D
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Re: My first composite!

Postby Leigh » Sat Jul 25, 2009 1:42 am

ahh DW

its happend to me ALOT its one of those things where you just forget :P
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Re: My first composite!

Postby gtirob01 » Sat Jul 25, 2009 8:37 am

Very nice, I like it alot! As RAFleigh said... the prop. But thats easy to forget about when working with a composite.

As for the reflection, you could either add a slight ocean ripple effect to what you already have, or use a plugin called "flood". It allows you to place a sort of horizon line, and everything below it will reflect whatever is above the line. In your shot, there is a distinct water line which would be perfect for this. You can get it here

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Re: My first composite!

Postby EJW » Sat Jul 25, 2009 8:57 am

Nice.
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Re: My first composite!

Postby SubZer0 » Sat Jul 25, 2009 4:49 pm

Very nice, I like it alot! As RAFleigh said... the prop. But thats easy to forget about when working with a composite.

As for the reflection, you could either add a slight ocean ripple effect to what you already have, or use a plugin called "flood". It allows you to place a sort of horizon line, and everything below it will reflect whatever is above the line. In your shot, there is a distinct water line which would be perfect for this. You can get it here

http://www.flamingpear.com/download.html

What a difference! :o





Thanks, Rob!
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Re: My first composite!

Postby lunitic_8 » Sat Jul 25, 2009 6:57 pm

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Re: My first composite!

Postby gtirob01 » Sat Jul 25, 2009 7:12 pm

That looks excellent! Well done! Flood is such a neat tool to work with, you can do so much with it.
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Re: My first composite!

Postby ShaneG_old » Sat Jul 25, 2009 8:48 pm

Outstanding job for your first.  8-)

Can't wait to see some more.

Check out that link I sent you. ;)
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Re: My first composite!

Postby tcco94 » Sun Jul 26, 2009 1:38 am

Wow :o
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Re: My first composite!

Postby Mitch. » Sun Jul 26, 2009 4:21 am

I wish my first composite looked half as good as this. I think its just fine the way it is. Top work and I look forward to seeing more. [smiley=thumbsup.gif]
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