SWA try at contrails

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SWA try at contrails

Postby skoker » Mon Jun 01, 2009 7:50 pm

Tell me what you think... horrible right?
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Re: SWA try at contrails

Postby N. Chapman » Mon Jun 01, 2009 11:51 pm

Too dark and the direction isn't right. maybe move them left a bit.

But the overall setup is excellent :) ;D
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Re: SWA try at contrails

Postby tcco94 » Tue Jun 02, 2009 9:43 am

Wow this is a cool shot!  :o

Although I do agree it is too dark inless your engines are on fire...
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Re: SWA try at contrails

Postby skoker » Tue Jun 02, 2009 1:58 pm

I was going for something like this:
http://www.airliners.net/photo/Delta-Ai ... 42e944d63c
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Re: SWA try at contrails

Postby N. Chapman » Tue Jun 02, 2009 6:42 pm

If the lighting and angle was similar to the one in the photo then yeah i can see where you'd be going with the shot. ;)
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Re: SWA try at contrails

Postby gtirob01 » Tue Jun 02, 2009 10:41 pm

Not a bad effort at all after seeing what you were going for. Maybe a little thick close to the aircraft though.
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Re: SWA try at contrails

Postby tcco94 » Wed Jun 03, 2009 12:40 am

Well its still a hellof a shot..

I can see what you were doing but I agree maybe at a different angle but I still love this shot either way.  8-)
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