My Studio V edit this attempt (second ever edit)

[machineman9]

i have already posted this as my second entry in the studio V edit this comp

THE ORIGINAL



THE EDITED


and i would like some feedback please



P.S this is my SECOND ever edit (the first edit was my first entry)

[gijake]

trippie.  exeactly how much acid have you had today?

[machineman9]

not enough lol

[born_2_fly]

Its a good shot, the only thing i would say is that way that the nose and tail are in the 'soft focus' part of the screen. Other than that, I like.

Alex

[BAW0343]

And exactly why are we doing a poll?  Let me let you in on a Little secret, most Sim-V members don't like the poll unless we are voting on what screenshot is best in the competition or the occasional "do I need my injection today?" type poll  ;) I happen to know this because i am one of those people  ;D If you want to know how you did on your edit, simply just ask for it you don't need a poll to do so  ;D

Anyway good edit, i don't remember my second edit but I'm pretty sure it was worse than that  ;D

[machineman9]

hehe thanks, i only put on the poll so that you lovely people dont have to go to the trouble of writing messages (well, unless you want to)

[blckhwk1]

I'm just gona come out and say it, the original is better than the edit in this case. I've learned that blunt seems to be better than not, sorry.

[Harold]

Pretty good for a second edit!

[machineman9]

thanks, im currently waiting for the next 'edit this' contest

[ShaneG_old]

Couldn't find your first, but these are nice shots! 8-)

[machineman9]

Couldn't find your first, but these are nice shots! 8-)

From over 2 years ago  ;)