My First Edit

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My First Edit

Postby LSmedley92291 » Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:41 am

Although I think that I posted an edit here before, this is actually my first. I re-found it while scanning through pictures on my computer. It's very simple, but tell me what you think.

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Re: My First Edit

Postby spitfire boy » Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:52 am

YF-23...yumyumyum ;D

This is actually a really good edit, the silhouette and the graduated black surrounding the shot make a great contrast to the weather... which is undeniably white. ;) All in all, a very dramatic shot. The only thing is a few barely-noticeable jaggies on the aircraft, but they really don't have much of an effect on the overall edit.
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Re: My First Edit

Postby LSmedley92291 » Tue Jul 10, 2007 9:57 am

Thanks!
Jaggies are a BIG problem for me. Ireject alot of my own shots because of them. This was one that i was happy with. Keep those comments coming!
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Re: My First Edit

Postby NDSP » Tue Jul 10, 2007 10:04 am

The edit looks great :) Like spit said its a very dramatic shot.. I say its a great start to your editing career  :)
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Re: My First Edit

Postby voodoo1 » Wed Jul 11, 2007 3:54 pm

Beauty..  Keep them coming mate!
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Re: My First Edit

Postby Sytse » Thu Jul 12, 2007 7:39 am

Cool!  8-)
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Re: My First Edit

Postby LSmedley92291 » Thu Jul 12, 2007 10:56 am

Thanks guys! To be honest I didn't think that i would get this much feedback. I don't have much skill at complex edits, but I'm reading tutorials like there's no tomorrow, so hopefully mine will only get better.

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