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Maho Beach

Postby NDSP » Tue Jul 10, 2007 12:38 pm

This is my first Maho Beach edit... so go easy on me ;D

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Re: Maho Beach

Postby LSmedley92291 » Tue Jul 10, 2007 12:57 pm

I think the gear is coming out a little too late, but other than that looks pretty good as far as I can tell.

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Re: Maho Beach

Postby NDSP » Tue Jul 10, 2007 1:13 pm

I think the gear is coming out a little too late, but other than that looks pretty good as far as I can tell.

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The gear is fully extended :-?
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Re: Maho Beach

Postby ThatOnePerson » Tue Jul 10, 2007 1:44 pm

The plane is MUCH to low, looks like its gonna clip the sand bank let alone cars and the fence ;)
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Re: Maho Beach

Postby NDSP » Tue Jul 10, 2007 1:57 pm

The plane is MUCH to low, looks like its gonna clip the sand bank let alone cars and the fence ;)



True...  ;D Next time I try an edit like this Ill try to get a photo that gives me a better look at where the plane should be
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Re: Maho Beach

Postby cpthammond » Tue Jul 10, 2007 3:51 pm

The plane is MUCH to low, looks like its gonna clip the sand bank let alone cars and the fence ;)



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Re: Maho Beach

Postby an-225 » Wed Jul 11, 2007 5:16 am

Hey, I found this exact photo while trying to piece together my 747-200 composite. :P

As far as the edit goes...I will be honest, but I will also point out what you could improve on. I don't really like it...however, you could improve by doing several things. Firstly, cut down on the grain. You seem to like going for realism - in reality, there is very little grain. It also detracts from the wonderful details of the photo and the CLS 300/310. Secondly, if I can remember correctly, AF have used the 300 series from...the late 70s to the present day (albeit cutting back on their fleet...). I'm sure that, during the 70s and early 80s, most of the structures in the background did not exist, thus, leaving us with the late 80s/90s/2000s. Film quality during these periods in time was grand, and it allowed for quite a lot of colour, and light. Try not to desaturate the picture so much to reflect this film quality.

Well Nick, I hope that helped. :)
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Re: Maho Beach

Postby NDSP » Wed Jul 11, 2007 7:08 am

Alright  :) Now that I look back at it I can also see I put to much grain on.

Thanks everyone for the advice/comments

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