"So, how was your first time?" - "Erm...awful..."

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"So, how was your first time?" - "Erm...awful..."

Postby ATI_7500 » Thu May 31, 2007 8:51 am

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Re: "So, how was your first time?" - "Erm...awful.

Postby lilley » Thu May 31, 2007 2:33 pm

i really like it!  :o

Although the fire and smoke could use a bit of work, i wouldnt be the one to instruct you on that... keep going, i want to see more!  8-)

Other than that its a great edit!!!!

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Re: "So, how was your first time?" - "Erm...awful.

Postby spitfire boy » Fri Jun 01, 2007 5:27 am

Is this intended as an entry for the 'edit this' comp?

It'll certainly go far if it is!!
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Re: "So, how was your first time?" - "Erm...awful.

Postby ATI_7500 » Fri Jun 01, 2007 7:11 am

Is this intended as an entry for the 'edit this' comp?


Yeah, it is.
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Re: "So, how was your first time?" - "Erm...awful.

Postby GunnerMan » Sat Jun 02, 2007 12:21 am

Cool shot and don't be worried about the fire to much, it is very hard to get any fire to look 'real' in an FS shot, I spent hours trying to get a space shuttle to look like it was on re-entry. My fire looked about the same as yours when I finished. Now that I think about it you might want to put the fire on it's own layer and assuming your using PS make a couple layers and mess around with the blending options to make it brighter etc. Also try and use filters such as glass, glow, and plastic wrap to try and give it a bit of depth. Also www.good-tutorials.com has many great fire tutorials you could use to adapt into FS. This is all assuming of course you ever want to do another fire shot.
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Re: "So, how was your first time?" - "Erm...awful.

Postby voodoo1 » Sat Jun 02, 2007 4:19 am

Looks like my first time was a lot better than his lol..  Nice work here, a difficult subject to work on for a composite but you've done well.
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Re: "So, how was your first time?" - "Erm...awful.

Postby ATI_7500 » Sat Jun 02, 2007 2:43 pm

Thanks for the hint, Gunner, but I'm using GIMP. :/
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Re: "So, how was your first time?" - "Erm...awful.

Postby NDSP » Sat Jun 02, 2007 3:34 pm

it might just be me, but it looks like you unfocused the plane
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Re: "So, how was your first time?" - "Erm...awful.

Postby ATI_7500 » Sat Jun 02, 2007 4:57 pm

Blurriness is intended.
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