Beaver at rest

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Beaver at rest

Postby ThatOnePerson » Mon May 14, 2007 9:55 pm

I'm not to sure about the lighting but ill give it a go since I haven't posted a composite in a while ::)

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Re: Beaver at rest

Postby FlyBajan » Mon May 14, 2007 10:21 pm

Looks good, but if I could suggest some tweaks they would be:
1. Plane should be seen from slightly higher angle.
2. Look at the shadows in the mountain tops. The light is coming from roughly the
   2 o'clock position (top right). The light on your plane seems to be from the top left of the image.

It is fun to look at though!
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Re: Beaver at rest

Postby Sytse » Tue May 15, 2007 4:26 am

Nice, but I'd have to agree with Bajan. The perspective of the plane doesn't match that of the background. The right wing should be pointing to the horizon.
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Re: Beaver at rest

Postby Splat762 » Tue May 15, 2007 9:49 am

Neat edit!

IMHO the plane looks too small...kinda like a R/C plane or toy.  I love the background!
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