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First Edit

Postby DONTREADMYUSERNAME » Sat May 05, 2007 9:38 pm

My first try at editing...

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Orignal...
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Re: First Edit

Postby Mees » Sun May 06, 2007 4:48 am

I think it's pretty neat, but compression did take it's toll afterwards didn't it ;)
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Re: First Edit

Postby DONTREADMYUSERNAME » Sun May 06, 2007 9:38 am

yea the orignal was 95 kbs but the edited one at same % compression was like 125.
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Re: First Edit

Postby Double_Farvel » Sun May 06, 2007 2:16 pm

Also, it seems oversharpened to me. :-/ Nice job though. ;)
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Re: First Edit

Postby Alphajet_Enthusiast » Mon May 07, 2007 3:05 am

Its not bad, I can see what you are trying to do, but try something aside from colours if you can, some background scenery, motion blur, or similar.
It depends on what software you are using, but you can always get a free month-long photoshop trial
from the Adobe website. I think it is a month, at least.  :)
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Re: First Edit

Postby NDSP » Mon May 07, 2007 6:41 am

I think you sharpened the crud outta it :-/

But I think you need to look at other peoples edits and see what you like and what you dont like. Thats what I did, and Im getting the hang of editing.

Nick... passing on comments on my first edits to new editors 8-)

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Re: First Edit

Postby Sytse » Mon May 07, 2007 5:04 pm

I like the new colours, just go easy on the sharpening. It should be very subtle and not clearly visible.  ;) Also, the pic could use some brightening and I'd crop off a big part of the ground to make the pic more balanced.
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Re: First Edit

Postby krigl » Thu May 10, 2007 4:09 am

Nice first effort, no critique to add to the above....except - I like the colour!

Red is bad for compression, though... try making the pic a bit smaller, say 700 wide - still big enough to view, but will be less heavy and you can keep more quality.

Playing with colours is a fun way to start with editing, makes my eyes go funny after doing it for a while though  :o
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