Not bad Stephen, but I think the tail of the F-16 in the foreground detracts the viewers eye to the glow of the burner in the middleground. Nice idea, but try doing it with the plane in the foreground.
Over MP this model F-16 (kirks first one) shows afterburners on other aircraft, all the time, we wernt full throttle thats why i didnt do it on the front F-16. Thanks for the comment