a basic edit

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a basic edit

Postby lilley91 » Tue May 09, 2006 4:11 pm

I am almost completely new to editing, i have only posted two pics before so go easy on me.  I was taking some pics of my latest flight, and decided that i would try to edit one of them.

the original is Picture 4 here

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and the compression has not done it any favours here either, it would be a bit more crisp but hey, there is nothing i can do about it.

please be honest, constructive criticism is always welcome, i would love to be able to get better at this.

cheers
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Re: a basic edit

Postby kipman725 » Tue May 09, 2006 4:29 pm

thats a very good edit, I like the crispy black and and white and the angles used.  But there apears to be some kind of graphical coruption around the edges of the shapes?
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Re: a basic edit

Postby BAW0343 » Tue May 09, 2006 6:03 pm

nice for a simple edit
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Re: a basic edit

Postby VVM » Tue May 09, 2006 6:07 pm

neat, i really like that   8)
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Re: a basic edit

Postby Jakemaster » Tue May 09, 2006 8:10 pm

thats a very good edit, I like the crispy black and and white and the angles used.  But there apears to be some kind of graphical coruption around the edges of the shapes?



Looks like the infamous aliasing to me :P

Nice edit!
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