Tail Shot at dusk

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Tail Shot at dusk

Postby EirePlane » Fri Oct 21, 2005 5:54 pm

Just a simple edit of one of my own paint schemes

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Re: Tail Shot at dusk

Postby flyboy 28 » Sat Oct 22, 2005 2:11 pm

Is that light on top supposed to be the sun?

If so, I'd suggest putting lighter colors around the top of it. It's not very often see red, red, red, sun, black! ;)


Just some constructive criticizm. :)
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Re: Tail Shot at dusk

Postby EirePlane » Sat Oct 22, 2005 2:58 pm

light on top was just supposed to be some lens flare where the light hit something shiny, i suppose i could do without it  :)
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Re: Tail Shot at dusk

Postby flyboy 28 » Sat Oct 22, 2005 3:09 pm

Ah okay. Just drop it down so it connects to the tail. ;)
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Re: Tail Shot at dusk

Postby GunnerMan » Sat Oct 22, 2005 6:29 pm

Looks good but I agree lower the flare intensity or burn some of it out. Put a sun either rendered or real in the lower right corner so it looks like its  setting and you will have a winner. Not something I would have done on one of my own edits but I do get many "visions" from other peoples work.  ;D
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Re: Tail Shot at dusk

Postby Sytse » Mon Oct 24, 2005 4:17 pm

oooh! I thought that was the beacon light there! lol
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Re: Tail Shot at dusk

Postby Flt.Lt.Andrew » Wed Oct 26, 2005 5:30 am

Thats excellent, looks quite artistic, as opposed to photgraphic, which is a good thing! You've done well.


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