Honest Opinnion please...

[Mynameisnemo]

of this song: Baby.

the song was put together earlier on today by myself (on keyboards and the drums) and my mum who wany was singing (and has got a throat infection).

was just done as a bit of fun, but any comments would be grately appreciated.

Nemo.......

edit.... i know there's no video, it wouldn't play as a .wav file at all, so its as a .wmv

[dcunning30]

It sounds like 1980's pop.  It's a catchy tune, but it desperately needs a bridge and an outro.  Even though the melody is catchy and definately hummable, it wears on the listener as it's repeated through the entire song.  But it's a good melody, you just need to refine the song, that's all.

[Souichiro]

Keyboard is a few notes to low... The song is too cheerfull for the keyboard.. The Piano needs to be replaced with a more electrical sounding sound..

What Dc said above.. needs finetuning...