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Postby Tom... » Wed Jan 30, 2008 5:57 pm

Still havent quite got the hang of airliners, but this is my latest shot although i am pretty pleased with it :P

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Please ignore the default ai i forgot to remove it :-[

Any tips on what i could do to improve?
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Re: Rate this

Postby spitfire boy » Wed Jan 30, 2008 5:58 pm

What the blummin 'eck do you mean you haven't got the hang of them? That's incredible!

Sorry, but this just has to be a 10 from me. :D
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Re: Rate this

Postby Tom... » Wed Jan 30, 2008 6:01 pm

It took me about 20 mins to get that shot, i just cant quite manage to frame the aircraft and find an angle i like and get something else happening in the shot like an airport should be, military jets are so easy...just bombing along at low level or soaring above the clouds ;D  and thanks for the rating ;)
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Re: Rate this

Postby spitfire boy » Wed Jan 30, 2008 6:04 pm

[quote]It took me about 20 mins to get that shot, i just cant quite manage to frame the aircraft and find an angle i like and get something else happening in the shot like an airport should be, military jets are so easy...just bombing along at low level or soaring above the clouds ;D
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Re: Rate this

Postby Cobra » Wed Jan 30, 2008 6:24 pm

I really like it mate, great angle and great scenery, lots going on! Really stunning image!  :)

On the real word side, that is a lot of flap for take off  ;)
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Re: Rate this

Postby Tom... » Thu Jan 31, 2008 4:01 pm

Thankyou for the ratining, please can some more people rate it to give it a chance

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Re: Rate this

Postby Tweek » Thu Jan 31, 2008 4:17 pm

7.5. Quite a nice angle but I think there's a bit too much depth, resolution wise. Leaves a fair bit of dead space, like the empty taxiway right through the middle of the shot, which could be eliminated with a bit of cropping (or zoom) and a slightly altered angle.
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Postby jankees » Thu Jan 31, 2008 4:23 pm

I think it's great, 9.5 from me
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Re: Rate this

Postby Alonso » Thu Jan 31, 2008 4:42 pm

Woww great!!!! Lovely scenery, nice dirt on the paint... good angle...

9/10 from me! :)
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Postby JLangholzJ » Thu Jan 31, 2008 6:44 pm

9.5 from me, absolutely supurb!!
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Re: Rate this

Postby Harold » Thu Jan 31, 2008 6:56 pm

Very nice ... looks like you've got inspired ;D

I don't really like rating art (as expression and taste) so I'll give it a 10!

Very nice screenshot.


BTW: you 'forgot' to remove your default AI ;)
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Re: Rate this

Postby Ashar » Thu Jan 31, 2008 7:45 pm

The top of the image looks empty even with the AI aircraft...Some jetways would've been very nice along with some airport traffic...The bottom of the image is almost way too "heavy" with the main action taking place there...

I'll give this a 7.5 ;)
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Re: Rate this

Postby a1 » Thu Jan 31, 2008 7:56 pm

8.5

Great loads of traffic and detail. The default AI ruins it a bit and I find the sharpness of the plane a bit distracting from the shot. All and all a pretty well composed shot. ;)
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Re: Rate this

Postby Clipper » Thu Jan 31, 2008 8:29 pm

NOt much wrong with this unique perspective. The principle aircraft is so well positioned. You can almost feel the lift. 9.0

Remember, if anyone receives the necessary 90+/100 in the first 10 rates to their pic, it's uo to you to let me know, so I can put it into our Gallery.
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Re: Rate this

Postby spitfire boy » Fri Feb 01, 2008 2:27 am

Just thought I'd post the total so far; from 9 ratings, Tom has 80.5 points.

So he needs a 9.5 or higher and it's in the gallery. :D
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