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Rip + rate...

Postby spitfire boy » Mon Jan 21, 2008 2:21 am

This was my contest entry for the december competition... held off posting it as a rate this until the contest was over...

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Re: Rip + rate...

Postby Tom... » Mon Jan 21, 2008 2:29 am

I think the gun fire ruins the shot IMO, a bit more light wouldnt have hurt scene as you can only just see the mountains in the background but the clouds are pretty nice and the plane is at a semi good angle so....

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Re: Rip + rate...

Postby a1 » Mon Jan 21, 2008 3:04 am

8

Pretty good composition. ;)
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Re: Rip + rate...

Postby stuart1044 » Mon Jan 21, 2008 3:15 pm

8 from me

Love the composition and the lighting, especially that from the airport.

The thing that lets it down is the fire, looks more like lights  :-/
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Re: Rip + rate...

Postby jankees » Tue Jan 22, 2008 12:21 pm

a 7 from me.
I think it is too dark (OK, brings out the muzzle flashes, but a Spit is not a nightfighter), and I'm not too keen on the angle...sorry.
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Re: Rip + rate...

Postby spitfire boy » Tue Jan 22, 2008 5:26 pm

I was aiming for a bit of a mood shot here, hence the dark lighting.... but it seems you think it's too dark.... I do have a lighter version but that looked very artificial which is why I didn't enter that one.
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