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Rip and Rate!

Postby ThomasKaira » Fri Nov 30, 2007 7:30 pm

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Re: Rip and Rate!

Postby cloud9 » Fri Nov 30, 2007 9:04 pm

I'll give it a 6.5 Sorry for being so harsh but I feel that the plane is too far to the right and leads the viewer off the page.  I feel that the composition could be improved
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Re: Rip and Rate!

Postby PD87 » Fri Nov 30, 2007 10:52 pm

Indeed it could use some improvement, but I love those clouds, and angle.

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Re: Rip and Rate!

Postby ThomasKaira » Sat Dec 01, 2007 12:32 am

[quote]I'll give it a 6.5 Sorry for being so harsh but I feel that the plane is too far to the right and leads the viewer off the page.
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Re: Rip and Rate!

Postby Slotback » Sat Dec 01, 2007 8:28 am

8.... It's just great, but not a stunner, maybe more dramatic lighting would help. :)





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Re: Rip and Rate!

Postby Ashar » Sat Dec 01, 2007 1:51 pm

7...The clouds are high res for a bit, then become low res...Really takes away from the entry :-/
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Re: Rip and Rate!

Postby jankees » Mon Dec 03, 2007 10:09 am

7 here too, the clouds and lighting are OK, but there isn't that much too look at overall
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Re: Rip and Rate!

Postby Harold » Mon Dec 03, 2007 12:02 pm

Nice angle on the bird and good lighting. I think that off center compositions are often very nice but somehow it doesn't work in this shot. Your clouds could use some attention; I agree with Ash.

I'll give it a 7.0
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Re: Rip and Rate!

Postby J. » Mon Dec 03, 2007 12:07 pm

i would give it a 7.5 and here is why

the clouds are lovely, the aircraft and livery is nice but my main gripes are

no ground and the texture of the aircraft is slight aliased towards the nose cone, and not so clear.
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Re: Rip and Rate!

Postby Clipper » Mon Dec 03, 2007 7:00 pm

7.0 Not much to see apart from the beautiful livery....let's see some depth, a bit more in the composition.  :)
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Re: Rip and Rate!

Postby ThomasKaira » Tue Dec 04, 2007 12:10 am

Like i said, groundless shots are too difficult to be practical. ::) ::)
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