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Postby Mazza » Fri Nov 23, 2007 2:01 am

My first pic in The workshop.
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Re: Rate This

Postby Ashar » Fri Nov 23, 2007 2:18 am

6...The aircraft is too far away plus the G-effects really make it hard to see the aircraft...The clouds don't look to good too...Sorry :-/
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Re: Rate This

Postby ThomasKaira » Fri Nov 23, 2007 2:38 am

6.5 from here. The scenery is bland, the sky is bland, the aircraft looks compressed, but it looks good doing what it is doing, so a small bonus there.

Not the worst, but not the best.  :-/
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Re: Rate This

Postby Slotback » Fri Nov 23, 2007 3:10 am

Turn up your Anti-Aliasing, zoom in allittle, and try adding a nice backdrop. Maybe more clouds or mountains or something. :)

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Re: Rate This

Postby Mitch. » Fri Nov 23, 2007 3:46 am

Its a 5 from me, definetly room for improvement. ;)
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Re: Rate This

Postby Mazza » Fri Nov 23, 2007 3:47 am

Turn up your Anti-Aliasing, zoom in allittle, and try adding a nice backdrop. Maybe more clouds or mountains or something. :)

4/10.


Yeah i know that the backround is bad(it's one of my old shots)

And Ashar G-effects are not on :-?

And My AA is on Full..... It's the sim(i've got 2002) and my Ram(it's tiny 256mb :-[)
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Re: Rate This

Postby cspyro21 » Fri Nov 23, 2007 4:56 am

4.5/10

All the criticisms above, but also you're image is 44kb / 100 (hence why the aircraft looks like the AA isn't turned on probably) - remember, each shot can be up to 100kb :)

Keep at it though, you'll never improve if you don't keep screenshooting! 8-)
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Re: Rate This

Postby Clipper » Fri Nov 23, 2007 5:00 am

6 Good advice from Cspyro here, keep at it, look carefully at others shots. Look in the Gallery, see what constitutes a brilliant shot and try to duplicate some of the techniques you see. Ask questions here at the Studio, everyone is here to help, advise and critique.
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Re: Rate This

Postby PD87 » Fri Nov 23, 2007 9:37 am

nice effect, but there isnt anything I can say that hasnt already been said above. practice! ;)

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Re: Rate This

Postby mrjake2002 » Fri Nov 23, 2007 10:35 am

Its a 4 from me I'm afraid. Same reasons as above.  ;)
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Re: Rate This

Postby a1 » Fri Nov 23, 2007 10:43 am

5

Needs more detail and AA. Some nice coloring wouldn't hurt. ;)
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Re: Rate This

Postby Ashar » Fri Nov 23, 2007 12:18 pm


And Ashar G-effects are not on :-?

And My AA is on Full..... It's the sim(i've got 2002) and my Ram(it's tiny 256mb :-[)


What's the white stuff then? ::) ;D
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Re: Rate This

Postby Mazza » Fri Nov 23, 2007 10:50 pm


And Ashar G-effects are not on :-?

And My AA is on Full..... It's the sim(i've got 2002) and my Ram(it's tiny 256mb :-[)


What's the white stuff then? ::) ;D


That's the vapor that comes on with the lights
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Re: Rate This

Postby Ashar » Fri Nov 23, 2007 11:03 pm


And Ashar G-effects are not on :-?

And My AA is on Full..... It's the sim(i've got 2002) and my Ram(it's tiny 256mb :-[)


What's the white stuff then? ::) ;D


That's the vapor that comes on with the lights


It's still a G-effect ;) ;)

It's bound to a light key rather than being XML coded ;)
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Re: Rate This

Postby Mazza » Fri Nov 23, 2007 11:36 pm


And Ashar G-effects are not on :-?

And My AA is on Full..... It's the sim(i've got 2002) and my Ram(it's tiny 256mb :-[)


What's the white stuff then? ::) ;D


That's the vapor that comes on with the lights


It's still a G-effect ;) ;)

It's bound to a light key rather than being XML coded ;)


Actually it is but i did not know where to put the XML files ;D

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