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Rip, Rate, Criticize

Postby a1 » Thu Oct 25, 2007 12:12 am

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Re: Rip, Rate, Criticize

Postby spitfire boy » Thu Oct 25, 2007 4:02 am

If I'm being hyper-critical, I think some more shots nearer the camera would help.

Other than that, I really can't see anything to rip!! :D
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Re: Rip, Rate, Criticize

Postby Clipper » Thu Oct 25, 2007 4:47 am

Nice shot. Shows speed, crisp scenery, angles and perspective are neat and appealing..clouds realistic and well positioned..interesting aircraft, lighting, depth, contrast nice..overall don't see anything to criticize...little aliasing issue in the vertical stripe on the chopper but who's looking.. ;) Very balanced shot in a quiet, effective way.
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Re: Rip, Rate, Criticize

Postby Slotback » Thu Oct 25, 2007 8:51 am

If it were 2d the skid would be touching the mountain. :) That's the only thing I dislike.

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Re: Rip, Rate, Criticize

Postby thebrelon » Thu Oct 25, 2007 10:12 am

nothing much to say, may be a litlle bit closer, or a little bit more off center, to be picky...
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Re: Rip, Rate, Criticize

Postby aussiewannabe » Thu Oct 25, 2007 10:47 am

Looks good from where I'm sitting 8-)
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Re: Rip, Rate, Criticize

Postby Ashar » Thu Oct 25, 2007 10:49 am

A few more clouds in the top left corner wouldn't have hurt...Other than that, top notch shot ;)
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Re: Rip, Rate, Criticize

Postby thebrelon » Thu Oct 25, 2007 3:04 pm

may be more light on the helo. I mean, the valley in the dark, and the helicopter lights by the last sun rays...

this would higlight the action, and make the shot even more dynamic.

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