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Postby aussiewannabe » Sat Sep 29, 2007 8:58 pm

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Re: Rip This!!

Postby cloud9 » Sat Sep 29, 2007 10:17 pm

That lighting is bugging me as it's white during a sunrise/set and its on the wrong side of the plane for where the sun is.

Just my opinion :'(

I really like the colors though ;)
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Re: Rip This!!

Postby aussiewannabe » Sat Sep 29, 2007 11:52 pm

Your opinion is so noted and I appreciate it. It's a sunset with the AC flying over a thunderstorm.

Personally, I don't like the AC. It went bye-bye within a few minutes after I posted the shot.
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Re: Rip This!!

Postby spitfire boy » Sun Sep 30, 2007 1:46 am

I can't find fault with this one... other than maybe pointing out that it's all a bit basic...which isn't necessarily a bad thing... but maybe try some more interesting angles next time. ;)
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Re: Rip This!!

Postby Clipper » Sun Sep 30, 2007 8:10 am

Nice overall but....I feel the aircraft looks "placed". No intensity or character to the mood set by the shot. The aircraft looks "stubby", kind of squished if you know what I mean. Sky colors are nice. I would try to get a better, more interesting attitude on the aircraft. There's no multiple focal points or depth here either, everything looks one dimensional. Here's a couple of example of depth, each pic showing a few different "focal points". Try to acheive that "reach into" or multiple layered feel in your screenshots.

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Re: Rip This!!

Postby Ashar » Sun Sep 30, 2007 11:05 am

I remember that second screenshot...Wasn't that Spyro in the KLM Beech? ;D
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Re: Rip This!!

Postby Clipper » Sun Sep 30, 2007 11:09 am

Yes Ashar, good memory. The pic placed second by one vote in the Screenshot Comp many months ago... :)
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Re: Rip This!!

Postby aussiewannabe » Sun Sep 30, 2007 6:36 pm

Thanks for all the comments!

To be honest, I really wasn't into this AC at all. I think I was bored with it and took a shot. Actually, I took many shots trying to get that lightning effect on it. Oh, well!

I have much better shots with other ACs :-)
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