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Postby spitfire boy » Thu Sep 20, 2007 10:52 am

to shreds... ;D

This is my entry for mees' 737/777 jc comp; I was going for the 'camera-in-the-tail' viewpoint...

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Re: Rip this...

Postby Ashar » Thu Sep 20, 2007 10:59 am

Way too zoomed out...I like the sky textures though ;) ;)
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Re: Rip this...

Postby simonmd » Thu Sep 20, 2007 11:42 am

Aggreed, the sky and ground look fantastic but the aircraft ruins it.
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Re: Rip this...

Postby Layne. » Thu Sep 20, 2007 5:03 pm

Sorry i dont like the angle



you could improve it by making the angle of the aircraft on the nose but angled to the right or left of the fuselage a bit or a kind of back view but angled a bit not directly to the tail or any other creative angles and this would look awesome.
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Re: Rip this...

Postby Purplehaze515 » Thu Sep 20, 2007 5:08 pm

A wingview of all that would be really nice or the view from the engine.
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Re: Rip this...

Postby Clipper » Thu Sep 20, 2007 9:12 pm

Beautiful sky as previously mentioned...Flying "in the clouds" is a sure fire way to continually create great shots. The shot in principle is superb, just keep the aircraft lookng real.  :)
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Re: Rip this...

Postby spitfire boy » Fri Sep 21, 2007 1:46 am

righto... if you looked at the jc thread you'll have seen that I asked whether I could replace my earlier entry with this;
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So now I want you to rip this one to pieces instead. ;D
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Re: Rip this...

Postby Layne. » Fri Sep 21, 2007 3:13 am

the plane could use a bit more detail
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