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Screenshot Critique: At Berlin

Postby Mees » Sat Sep 01, 2007 2:22 pm

One shot, it's like completely full of details, it's waht i quite like about it... :)


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Re: Screenshot Critique: At Berlin

Postby Ben R » Sat Sep 01, 2007 2:25 pm

Aye, very detailed! I sure do love it :)

Great shot! Nothing wrong with it at all :)

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Re: Screenshot Critique: At Berlin

Postby spitfire boy » Sat Sep 01, 2007 2:27 pm

The textures on that 737 make it look, at first glance, like it's been cut in half... ;D

Joking, this is a really great shot - the colours, composition, detail (you're right there), clarity, sharpness... the one thing I would say is maybe make the sky more interesting... ;)
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Re: Screenshot Critique: At Berlin

Postby Mees » Sat Sep 01, 2007 2:28 pm

the one thing I would say is maybe make the sky more interesting... ;)




That's gonna be a hard one in Germany :P


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Re: Screenshot Critique: At Berlin

Postby matt2190 » Sat Sep 01, 2007 2:35 pm

I do not like the containers in front of the aircraft. The containers block the wing and part of the engine. It is not your fault that the containers have been set there, but just a minor little thing I noticed.
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Re: Screenshot Critique: At Berlin

Postby Mike.. » Sat Sep 01, 2007 2:45 pm

Just a hint more off the ground from your shot. Just enough to get over those crates and catch the rest of the AC. And or pan a little to the left or right and still catch it all. My 2 cents. Awesome shot in any case mate!



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Re: Screenshot Critique: At Berlin

Postby john_uk » Sat Sep 01, 2007 7:40 pm

The textures on that 737 make it look, at first glance, like it's been cut in half... ;D

Joking, this is a really great shot - the colours, composition, detail (you're right there), clarity, sharpness... the one thing I would say is maybe make the sky more interesting... ;)


LOL that comment about interesting sky is so just copied from harold.
the sky does not have to be dramatic everytime. the sky is not like that, the sky most the time is a dull shade

for as long as i have known mees, he has always gone for realism in his shots, so the sky being dull and grey is just showing real weather.

dawn/dusk is only around for a tiny percentag of the day so its not necessary to have it in every shot. it just gets boreing... to much of a good thing you know what i mean..


the detail in the shto is awesome mees mate :)
only thing is the livery on the aircraft is a little distracting and does distract from the rest of the image, perhaps a similar show with a ordinary KLM repaint would be better :)

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Re: Screenshot Critique: At Berlin

Postby spitfire boy » Sun Sep 02, 2007 2:52 am

The textures on that 737 make it look, at first glance, like it's been cut in half... ;D

Joking, this is a really great shot - the colours, composition, detail (you're right there), clarity, sharpness... the one thing I would say is maybe make the sky more interesting... ;)


LOL that comment about interesting sky is so just copied from harold.


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