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Critique

Postby Immelman » Sun Jul 01, 2007 3:26 pm

Studio's been slow and I haven't posted a raw screen for a while so...
Rip this:

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Re: Critique

Postby MOUSY » Sun Jul 01, 2007 8:34 pm

I really love this shot... the lighting and shadows were nailed. The scenery is awesome... cloud cover is just right... small village in the valley gives something else to look at apart from just the ranges... crafted looks great and is well lit...
Just one nit-pick which may be entirely personal... I would have positioned the craft slightly lower, nearer to the corner... to give the effect of the GR4 rushing past the viewer in a turn.
Very well composed shot Immelman.  8-)
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Re: Critique

Postby Immelman » Sun Jul 01, 2007 10:02 pm

Thanks mouse.  I spent a lot of time composing this one before i hit print screen so it's nice to hear you like it.
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Re: Critique

Postby an-225 » Sun Jul 01, 2007 10:18 pm

I concur with MOUSE. And one nit-pick from me aswell, the mountains in the distance seem a little blurred. Perhaps refreshing the scenery may help the textures load. ;)
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