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Screenshot Critique: Mees on the bandwagon

Postby Mees » Tue May 08, 2007 4:44 pm

How the hell do you critisize this...? :P...Good luck.. ;D



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Re: Screenshot Critique: Mees on the bandwagon

Postby MOUSY » Tue May 08, 2007 5:45 pm

How the hell do you critisize this...? :P...

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Re: Screenshot Critique: Mees on the bandwagon

Postby Alonso » Tue May 08, 2007 5:55 pm

Amazing shot Mees... if I only had to change something, it would be the repaint, as it doesn't look like the best...
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Mees on the bandwagon

Postby Double_Farvel » Tue May 08, 2007 6:52 pm

Amazing shot Mees... if I only had to change something, it would be the repaint, as it doesn't look like the best...

Yes, that would also be my only crticism. Great shot!
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Mees on the bandwagon

Postby Jakemaster » Tue May 08, 2007 10:11 pm

The horizon angle is annoying, the paint sucks, and it isn't the most original shot I've ever seen.  Sorry, but it really is not a great shot, just another boring TNCM approach.
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Mees on the bandwagon

Postby krigl » Wed May 09, 2007 1:38 am

Classic a.net shot  :o

Yep, it's 'another' St.Maartens job but it's a good one IMHO.... can't imagine it being much better as an FS shot.... if going for total realism it would be better without the people and with some waves on the sea, but I like trying to make FS look as real as possible, with it's limitations... the FS people standing and looking are a charming touch - they seem almost alive  :)
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Mees on the bandwagon

Postby eno » Wed May 09, 2007 1:42 am

Bit high weren't you  ;D ;D
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Mees on the bandwagon

Postby Mees » Wed May 09, 2007 3:32 am

60ft which is exactly the right altitude as you must cross the tresshold at 50ft ;)
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Mees on the bandwagon

Postby DizZa » Wed May 09, 2007 3:35 am

Not very realistic. Why? The Air France plane isn't as dirty as real life.  >:(

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Nah just kidden. Good shot. Only suggestion I have is more clouds, morning landing (lighting) and maybe a diferant livery.
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Mees on the bandwagon

Postby Sytse » Wed May 09, 2007 6:22 am

I'd try blurring the people and changing the water. Apart from that, it's a nice shot.  :)
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Mees on the bandwagon

Postby NDSP » Wed May 09, 2007 6:31 am

How the hell do you critisize this...? :P...Good luck.. ;D



It didnt really stand out to me in any way. It is sort of a boring shot. No morning or dawn lighting, no harsh weather.  I think the shot might look better without the people in general. When you see the people, it dawns on you that its just a sim. When I look at a shot, I look at the realism and whether or not it looks like a photo. This shot just didnt seem like a photo to me because of the repaint, people, and water.

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Re: Screenshot Critique: Mees on the bandwagon

Postby ATI_7500 » Wed May 09, 2007 6:33 am

The horizon angle is annoying, the paint sucks, and it isn't the most original shot I've ever seen.  Sorry, but it really is not a great shot, just another boring TNCM approach.


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Re: Screenshot Critique: Mees on the bandwagon

Postby Mees » Wed May 09, 2007 7:12 am

[quote]I'd try blurring the people and changing the water. Apart from that, it's a nice shot.
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Mees on the bandwagon

Postby Sytse » Wed May 09, 2007 3:15 pm

[quote][quote]I'd try blurring the people and changing the water. Apart from that, it's a nice shot.
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Mees on the bandwagon

Postby Mees » Wed May 09, 2007 3:18 pm

I mean mostly the water, how do I do that?
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