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Postby ThatOnePerson » Thu May 10, 2007 8:32 pm

I also entered it in the Judges comp, what can I do to improve?

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Re: Rate This

Postby Double_Farvel » Thu May 10, 2007 8:43 pm

As I mentioned in the Judges Choice Thread...ABSOLUTELY STUNNING!  :o :o I have no criticisms.  ;)
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Re: Rate This

Postby Jakemaster » Thu May 10, 2007 9:48 pm

Horizon angle is annoying and it is not unique.  STOP WITH THE STUPID TNCM SHOTS FROM THE BAR!  Try a different location, and STRAIGHTEN the horizon
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Re: Rate This

Postby Alonso » Thu May 10, 2007 10:01 pm

ABSOLUTELY STUNNING!


that's it... there are many TNCM shots or edits, but this one is amazing.
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Re: Rate This

Postby ThatOnePerson » Thu May 10, 2007 10:24 pm

Horizon angle is annoying and it is not unique.  STOP WITH THE STUPID TNCM SHOTS FROM THE BAR!  Try a different location, and STRAIGHTEN the horizon

To be honest, straighting the horizon would ruin it to me.
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Re: Rate This

Postby eno » Fri May 11, 2007 1:39 am

Horizon angle is annoying and it is not unique.  STOP WITH THE STUPID TNCM SHOTS FROM THE BAR!  Try a different location, and STRAIGHTEN the horizon


Bit of an over reaction.

Great shot ...... good edit ....  ;D ;D
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Re: Rate This

Postby CSM » Fri May 11, 2007 2:50 am

honestly i like the whole tncm approach shots but they are all the same so i wouldnt mind seeing some shots of them at night or during rough storms so on.... anyway i like this shot alot good work 8-)
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Re: Rate This

Postby krigl » Fri May 11, 2007 5:52 am

I also entered it in the Judges comp, what can I do to improve?

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Brilliant! Yep, another shot from the bar, but when I get that scenery I'm going to do exactly the same  ;D

I wonder what the ai traffic frequency is like there... might be nice to just plonk myself down there with Walk and Follow, then watch as all the ai comes in  :) Well, for a little while.

Classic a.net shot, that's why it looks so real.
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Re: Rate This

Postby Sytse » Fri May 11, 2007 11:28 am

Not very original and the water looks bad, but quite nice overall.

And... erm... tailstrike?
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Re: Rate This

Postby stuart1044 » Fri May 11, 2007 11:55 am

Brilliant edit, one thing though, i don't like the black lines at the top and bottom, don't know why though ;D
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Re: Rate This

Postby NDSP » Fri May 11, 2007 3:50 pm

The water is the only thing I dont like about it. Its too fake. Not to mention the tree in the back dont look all that realistic to me.... Please I dont want any controversy over this post, all I was doing is criticizing it to help you.

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Re: Rate This

Postby Mees » Fri May 11, 2007 5:27 pm

Here, I've redone the water and beach 'cos that's the only thing that I don't like about it ;)

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Re: Rate This

Postby ThatOnePerson » Fri May 11, 2007 5:30 pm

Hehe not bad Mees, only problem I see is it would be more of a surf (I think)
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Re: Rate This

Postby Sytse » Fri May 11, 2007 6:24 pm

Hey, that's a lot better!  :)
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Re: Rate This

Postby john_uk » Fri May 11, 2007 6:41 pm

Horizon angle is annoying and it is not unique.  STOP WITH THE STUPID TNCM SHOTS FROM THE BAR!  Try a different location, and STRAIGHTEN the horizon


clam down hitler :P

awesome shots there, the water lets it down slightly but editing water to a good degree is a hard thing to ge the nack off, but seriously stunning 8-)

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