by F-16Viper » Fri May 04, 2007 12:11 pm
Wow... The fire is nice, although for some reason it looks a little too wild, but unconcentrated at the same time.
And like said before, the smoke could use a little help. Maybe make it a little thicker. And also, what the heck happened to the back of it? It was going OK, then suddenly it looks like mud smeared on a window :P
And also, idk what, but maybe you could do something about the leaves/branches that are directly in front.

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