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Any tips for a Rookie?

Postby NDSP » Thu Apr 12, 2007 11:45 am

Here my latest edit of a shot of mine

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Help with it or tips or anything is welcomed (and or needed)

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Re: Any tips for a Rookie?

Postby Souichiro » Thu Apr 12, 2007 12:02 pm

Choose a less boring shot to edit. This one is just blue sky and a plane. The plane itself isn't really detailed either. So except for radical colouring there isn't much you can do with this shot.


Just IMHO though

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Re: Any tips for a Rookie?

Postby Double_Farvel » Thu Apr 12, 2007 1:53 pm

Try and edit a pic that is full of detail.  ;)
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Re: Any tips for a Rookie?

Postby NDSP » Thu Apr 12, 2007 2:10 pm

Try and edit a pic that is full of detail.  ;)


Heres my latest edit.. in the edited section  ::)


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I tried to follow souichs advice on this one... i dunno how well i did.. but


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Re: Any tips for a Rookie?

Postby Souichiro » Thu Apr 12, 2007 2:41 pm

Way better!!! Do you have the raw screen for us as well?
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Re: Any tips for a Rookie?

Postby NDSP » Thu Apr 12, 2007 2:51 pm

Way better!!! Do you have the raw screen for us as well?


yup


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Re: Any tips for a Rookie?

Postby krigl » Fri Apr 13, 2007 7:35 am

You overdarkened the shot - easy to do  :) - and there still isn't much background detail.

Clouds. Mountains. Buildings. Other planes. You know - details  ;)
And try more dynamic angles. Use F1 view (free from Flight1 software) to help with this.

Try to sort out your problem with jaggies too. It really takes away from a shot.

Basic rule is that usually the original has to be good for the edit to look good. Look at other people's work. Copy it. That's how I learn.....and am still learning  ::) ;D

You're definitely improving though!!!
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Re: Any tips for a Rookie?

Postby NDSP » Fri Apr 13, 2007 8:28 am

Sorry for overdarkening it, Ive tried to download GIMP a few times.... does anyone know a mirror for it corresponding to the NorthEast of America?

Also, Krigl, I have posted in the hardware section for help with my hell Dell... and havent been able to fully cure the problem with jaggies

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Re: Any tips for a Rookie?

Postby concordepilot » Sat Apr 14, 2007 12:07 pm

I don't use photoshop, my demo time ran out  :(
I have always used paint.net and I get things like this.

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Re: Any tips for a Rookie?

Postby Cobra » Sat Apr 14, 2007 1:35 pm

hmmm, struggling to think of any tips...what exactly are you trying to achieve?

Im not trying to be rude (honestly ;D) but the editing seems to be kinda random, like blur it, adjust contrast the hue. You should really have a specific goal, and if your just gonna 'fiddle' with the colours etc then have a specific mood/tone in mind. I dunno, just my view....

I would join up at www.screenshotart.com though and ask there (and be a little more specific), they know what they are talking about ;)
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