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Mustang and Clouds

Postby Immelman » Sun Feb 04, 2007 5:03 pm

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Re: Mustang and Clouds

Postby Mythical » Sun Feb 04, 2007 7:09 pm

Looking at it non-professionally, the shot lacks the great model and paint, but overll its great!

Looking at it in a more professional way, as people have told me, it needs more action, and the model and paint arent too great, otherwise, the sky and clouds are perfect! the shot overall gives the impression of neverending peacefulness
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Re: Mustang and Clouds

Postby Clipper » Sun Feb 04, 2007 11:33 pm

I think you've done a beautiful job on the sky/clouds, the aircraft though looks somewhat out of proportion. Try to use zoom in/out, pan etc. to get your aircraft to look as realistically proportioned as possible. When you have your shot set up and before you hit "print screen", determine if that's what the aircraft would look like in a photograph, or does it look stretched, unrealistically small or at an attitude not normal for that type of aircraft. Here's an example of proportion and attitude, note as well i'm taking advantage of the reflective texture and getting a mirrored look in the fuselage. The aircraft position and attitude would be something typical to a wartime photograph or print. Image realism is important in trying to create certain styles of pics.
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Re: Mustang and Clouds

Postby Immelman » Mon Feb 05, 2007 3:36 pm

Thanks guys.  I tend to focus too much on one thing, this time the clouds, which leaves the other things lacking.  Ill keep your comments in mind.  Also, this is the first time ive tried to add a prop to an image.  How does this one look?
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Re: Mustang and Clouds

Postby Clipper » Mon Feb 05, 2007 4:44 pm

Great sig by the way Immelman :)..
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Re: Mustang and Clouds

Postby Mythical » Mon Feb 05, 2007 6:29 pm

[quote]Thanks guys.
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Re: Mustang and Clouds

Postby Immelman » Tue Feb 06, 2007 7:11 pm

Alright, ive taken another crack at it.
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Re: Mustang and Clouds

Postby Mythical » Tue Feb 06, 2007 7:25 pm

wow! its so in your face! just adjust the colours a bit and itll be awesome!
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Re: Mustang and Clouds

Postby FSGT Gabe » Tue Feb 06, 2007 8:13 pm

That last one is awesome :o.  The paint on the Mustang is much better.

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Re: Mustang and Clouds

Postby Immelman » Tue Feb 06, 2007 8:24 pm

SNOWBOARDING ROCKS!!! :D :D


I couldnt say it better.
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