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3 Screenshots to rate \ Screenshot Critique

Postby Tom... » Fri Jan 19, 2007 12:36 pm

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Re: 3 Screenshots to rate

Postby Splat762 » Fri Jan 19, 2007 1:17 pm

The E-3 AWACS is a little dark in the second shot but....

I LIKE'EM!!!  ;D
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Re: 3 Screenshots to rate

Postby concordepilot » Fri Jan 19, 2007 1:40 pm

Love them I might have a use for some of them.  ;)
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Re: 3 Screenshots to rate \ Screenshot Critique

Postby Sytse » Fri Jan 19, 2007 2:16 pm

1. Very cool! I like it a lot. The pilot is a bit high on the approach, but I don't blame him in this kind of weather... :)

2. It doesn't work for me. It's too blue and the plane is too dark. The string of clouds in the background looks a bit weird too.

3. Interesting shot. One major issue is the composition. Next time, try to bring the tail closer to the edge than the nose. Also, there are two lines in your picture, the aircraft and the horizon. They are both running straight trough the middle of the picture. However, a picture looks nice when your eyes can follow some diagonal line in it. So if you could just tilt one or both lines 45
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Re: 3 Screenshots to rate \ Screenshot Critique

Postby ATI_7500 » Fri Jan 19, 2007 3:00 pm

1: The landing light beam and the yellowness disturb the image.

2: No objections/suggestions. Good one!

3: I smell a copy of the pic I did in Strike Fighters. :D
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Re: 3 Screenshots to rate \ Screenshot Critique

Postby CSM » Fri Jan 19, 2007 11:32 pm

i like the first one alot but i dont like the ring around the nose of the aircraft  ;)
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Re: 3 Screenshots to rate \ Screenshot Critique

Postby stuart1044 » Sat Jan 20, 2007 10:27 am

[quote]i like the first one alot but i dont like the ring around the nose of the aircraft
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Re: 3 Screenshots to rate \ Screenshot Critique

Postby FSGT Gabe » Mon Jan 22, 2007 11:43 am

#1: LOVING it except for that ring around the nose...what is it :-??

#2: Clouds, sky, and sun are GREAT...but the plane is too dark.  It needs to be just a tad lighter so you can see some details instead of being just a black shape.

#3: I love the details on the plane, but the horizon line is too bland :-[.

Good shots.  Keep it up! :)

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Re: 3 Screenshots to rate \ Screenshot Critique

Postby fighter25 » Tue Jan 23, 2007 8:16 pm

#1: LOVING it except for that ring around the nose...what is it :-??



It's the landing lights. The snow makes the light beam show up. :D :D
By the way, great shots Tom. 8-) :o Is the first shot the IRIS Eagle? :-?
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Re: 3 Screenshots to rate \ Screenshot Critique

Postby Tom... » Wed Jan 24, 2007 1:50 am

Yep it is the Iris F-15D
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Re: 3 Screenshots to rate \ Screenshot Critique

Postby krigl » Wed Jan 24, 2007 6:46 am

First one very nice, but first thing I thought was 'too high'. I'm not sure if the landing light would look like that.
Second is great. Perhaps as said more detail on the plane, but wonderful colours.
Third one okay, the skin on that bird looks awesome.
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Re: 3 Screenshots to rate \ Screenshot Critique

Postby Helms » Wed Jan 24, 2007 4:32 pm

At first i thought the a/c was going supersonic in the first shot. :P

Overall, shots are really amazing :)
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Re: 3 Screenshots to rate \ Screenshot Critique

Postby Cobra » Wed Jan 24, 2007 4:48 pm

I think the 1st two are great, both really nice. Dunno why, but the third one doesnt do anything for me... :)
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