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Is this good? / Screenshot Critique

Postby Prom0 » Sat Jan 20, 2007 2:59 pm

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Hi.

This is my first work with Photoshop, what do you think?

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comments are welcome
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Re: Is this good? / Screenshot Critique

Postby Clipper » Sat Jan 20, 2007 3:05 pm

Why don't you try to explain to everyone what you did here, and what you were trying to accomplish.. :)
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Re: Is this good? / Screenshot Critique

Postby Prom0 » Sat Jan 20, 2007 3:14 pm

I wanted to make a nice afterburner.I readed in Studio V how to do it.
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Re: Is this good? / Screenshot Critique

Postby ATI_7500 » Sat Jan 20, 2007 3:45 pm

If you did the afterburner, you did it very well, although the colour should be more blue-ish for a Tornado. ;)
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Re: Is this good? / Screenshot Critique

Postby flymo » Sat Jan 20, 2007 4:01 pm

i think he has attempted to add heatblur to the afterburner effect
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Re: Is this good? / Screenshot Critique

Postby Sytse » Sun Jan 21, 2007 7:45 pm

Well, it looks nice to me, but the angle is off...
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Re: Is this good? / Screenshot Critique

Postby Jakemaster » Sun Jan 21, 2007 8:19 pm

The afterburner is nice, but the screenshot needs a better angle (higher up), and there needs to be some sort of a background like clouds.
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