How to improve these

[Ivan]

What improvements could be done to these (no fotosoep post-processing, only stuff like scenery, mesh, clouds etc)

Both from my 'Ilyushins at work' set

[Jakemaster]

Okay, for the first one I would suggest moving back some. Zoom seems OKAY, maybe zoom out one or two times, but use F1View to scroll out so that most of the plane is showing.  Also move up so that the wheels are at or near the bottom of the screen.  Because its snowing the sky is fine, it gives a nice feel, but maybe move the camera so that the bright spots on the plane are more enhanced.

The second is great, maybe change the weather so that the clouds arent infront of the foremost mountain so that it can be seen better

[Clipper]

I don't think I can add much to Jake's excellent advice on the first shot, but on the second here's what I think.
I've always felt that it's important to have a principal or main focal point in a shot. In your second shot, neither the aircraft or the mountains are presented as the principal feature of the pic. The two blend to-gether which doesn't really allow for much in the way of drama or interest. Everything becomes a one dimensional image. Look at these two examples of aircraft and mountains..In the first, the aircraft is the first and main focal point, it begins to tell the pics story, then the chalet, then the mountains. There's a main character (the Turbo Baron), with a few supporting actors (the chalet, the windsock, the mountains)..


Now in the second, the mountains become the main focal point. They look huge and ominous, dominating the picture. Then you see the chopper, then the people on the mountain waiting to be rescued. Again, the main actor, (the blizzardy mountain), and then the support actors (the chopper, snow and people) follow to complete the story. Really try to focus on one visual (either plane, scenery, weather etc, bring that forward, then follow with as many supporting visuals as you feel you need to make your pic "talk".  :)

[Souichiro]

I see hesitation in both shots..


In the first you didn't know whether to Zoom in or Zoom out... It's a little bit in the middle now... Not zoomed in to make the plane look huge and mighty and not zoomed out to show the entire plane.

Same thing in the second as to whether to show a lot of mountain or a lot of plane... Zoom in for the second option and change the setting or decor for the first

[Mees]

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