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Rip This Pic!

Postby Clipper » Wed Oct 11, 2006 8:53 pm

What do you think of this pic? What are some of the things you like, dislike, or detest about it? How would you have changed this pic to improve it? Or is it ok just the way it is?

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Re: Rip This Pic!

Postby thebrelon » Thu Oct 12, 2006 3:29 am

so you're back to business...

well... something is wrong in the pic but I can't tell exactly what. the clouds are too plain and dark.
there is no perspective. it's more a 2D pic than a 3D ones, if you see what I mean... flat... the bridge in the background would have been lighted, then...
I think that appart from the plane, the rest of the picture is more disturbing than helping to understand what is hapening... may be because they are not related to the action going on...

the overall lighting is good, and the plane is good looking. nav lights or beacon lights would have help to focus on the plane...


that's what I think... I would like to see what others think about it...

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Re: Rip This Pic!

Postby Souichiro » Thu Oct 12, 2006 3:53 am

Improper zoom use

It's neither zoomed in or out.. Gives an unbalanced feeling. And since the shot is shown at that angle with the plane flying in that angle you don't know whether Its climbing or descending or just flying over with it's gear down.

And another thing is the water ( at least I think it's water) which isn't clear enough to be water.. therefor it seems that the middle bit ( bridge is farthest and ground below plane closest..) is floating in mid-air

That's my opinion  + what Vince said
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Re: Rip This Pic!

Postby cspyro21 » Thu Oct 12, 2006 10:13 am

Rip This Pic!


No thanks Danny....you know what happens when I "Rip Pics" ;D
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