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Kingmark's go at the gallery

Postby kingmarktheaviator » Thu Aug 24, 2006 4:56 pm

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This is my helicopter shot, thought I would go for the gallery with it.  If you think it isnt worthy of the gallery please, by all means, give me some advice on how to improve my shots and I would be very grateful.
Regards from the capital of liquid sunshine (Devon UK),

Mark
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Re: Kingmark's go at the gallery

Postby Harold » Thu Aug 24, 2006 4:59 pm

Nice ... I say yes!
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Re: Kingmark's go at the gallery

Postby MOUSY » Thu Aug 24, 2006 5:11 pm

Improve your backdrop with possibly:
- different coloured sky.
- and better cloud formations.
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Re: Kingmark's go at the gallery

Postby Immelman » Thu Aug 24, 2006 5:26 pm

I agree with mouse.
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Re: Kingmark's go at the gallery

Postby flymo » Thu Aug 24, 2006 7:02 pm

I agree with mouse.


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Re: Kingmark's go at the gallery

Postby Clipper » Thu Aug 24, 2006 9:19 pm

Great looking chopper, try to add 2 or 3 more focal points....some scenery...the pic could use a bit more drama or tell a bit more of a story.  :)
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Re: Kingmark's go at the gallery

Postby Souichiro » Fri Aug 25, 2006 6:33 am

I like it!! The shot is really set up in a way that you could actually make it.. sorta like ... I'm walking on the streets (maybe a park) and I see this helo... Snap! photo!!

So a yes from me
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Re: Kingmark's go at the gallery

Postby Overspeed » Fri Aug 25, 2006 10:29 am

it really needs something else in the background rather than plain sky, but the slight soft focus and crisp picture makes it look awesome
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