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to End the night

Postby scalper_old » Wed Jan 14, 2009 2:08 am

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Re: to End the night

Postby Daube » Wed Jan 14, 2009 10:59 am

The second shot is really nice.
The third one needs some work. I see what you tried to achieve, the AI behind you is interesting, so are the clouds, but the scenery itself lacks some details, it's just a little bit empty :)
The first one I didn't like the colors. It's a bit boring.
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Re: to End the night

Postby ShaneG_old » Wed Jan 14, 2009 12:27 pm

The second shot is really nice.
The third one needs some work. I see what you tried to achieve, the AI behind you is interesting, so are the clouds, but the scenery itself lacks some details, it's just a little bit empty :)
The first one I didn't like the colors. It's a bit boring.



Got to agree with all of that, I think a plane lifting off in the third one on the left side of the shot would have made a real difference, or even cropping that side of the shot out, right up to the clouds in the center. And the white strip at the bottom needs to go away. ;)
Still, some nice work here. [smiley=thumbsup.gif]

Something like this for the third, maybe a little small for some though, but I like these kind of shots. ;)
http://www.simviation.com/yabbuploads/scalperSG1.jpg
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Re: to End the night

Postby Brando14100 » Wed Jan 14, 2009 3:35 pm

I like the first two, but the last one I don't like at all. The suggestions are good, but I don't think there's any variety in the traffic, and the AI is not in any detail.

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Re: to End the night

Postby scalper_old » Thu Jan 15, 2009 2:07 am

I really like what you did with my pic ShaneG looks much better. Great Advice, thanks for the hint.
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Re: to End the night

Postby haroldkip » Sat Jan 17, 2009 6:06 pm

I - for one - like the last shot! I think those clouds in the background are really nice. And the AI is too far away to have any detail on them.

It reminds me of this shot I once did at Anchorage International ...

Daube's and Shane's advice is good though. And the cropped shot is nice but I think I would've swung the camera to the left so that it would be in the same position on the opposite side of the aircraft. That way you can get the aircraft, the AI and the scenery.

Something like this or this
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Re: to End the night

Postby scalper_old » Sat Jan 17, 2009 6:11 pm

Thanks Harold IM now saving my images at higher k now and just starting using infraview yesterday. Thanks for all the help from everyone. My next goal is to have more detail in my shots now.
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