Screenshot Critique: Randoms part two

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Screenshot Critique: Randoms part two

Postby DizZa » Wed Mar 07, 2007 5:16 am

Continued on from:
http://www.simviation.com/cgi-bin/yabb2 ... 1173000406

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Re: Screenshot Critique: Randoms part two

Postby Helms » Wed Mar 07, 2007 7:57 am

You certainly are improving, but as for offering any tips i'm not sure.
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Randoms part two

Postby matt2190 » Wed Mar 07, 2007 8:08 am

Those are great shots. The only thing I can say is get some different angles. The last three are almost the same angle.
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Randoms part two

Postby krigl » Wed Mar 07, 2007 10:08 am

Ok, I think 2 is better than 1, seems to me to get the right balance between detailed plane and lovely scenery. Great pic! Of the second set, I think no 4 is the worst because of the tilt of the horizon. It makes it look as if the plane is climbing at a horribly steep angle. The 5th is probably the best of the 3 because the runway is in there and the angle looks okay. But it seems to me as if the runway should be somehow further to the left, as it seems directly behind the plane, yet the plane's already turned quite a lot. I hope that's helpful!?  :)
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Randoms part two

Postby Immelman » Wed Mar 07, 2007 4:42 pm

I agree that you need different angles, it's more interesting for a viewer if there is a lot of variety.
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Randoms part two

Postby CSM » Thu Mar 08, 2007 4:22 am

very very noice  8-)
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Re: Screenshot Critique: Randoms part two

Postby krigl » Thu Mar 08, 2007 6:24 am

Those are great shots. The only thing I can say is get some different angles. The last three are almost the same angle.


I think that's deliberate - he wanted us to tell him which of the similar shots is better and why.... but he didn't say so, so who knows  8-)
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