Opinions please...

[Mictheslik]

Just a compositve I've been working on for the SSA.com edit this competition. Any comments critisizm would be welcome



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[Tweek]

I think it's main shortfall is the lighting. If you look, the sun is behind the aircraft, yet the light is concentrated on the left hand side, with relatively little falling on the right.

You must take this into account when you take the original shot, so it doesn't look out of place in the real picture.

Hope this helps.

[Mictheslik]

I spent a lot of time with the dodge and burn on this one trying to make it look right...actually the sun is slightly offset to one side, but maybe I overdid it a little Thanks for the comment

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[krigl]

Very nicely cut out, cool shot. As said, a bit too much light on the lower left side, but still  8-)

[DaveT]

I think it is absolutely spot on, right lighting,christal clear,perfect.

[born_2_fly]

Sorry, but I think the position of the aircraft takes something away from the rest of the picture. Other than that, the way it's composed, and the lighting is beautiful  8-)

Maybe just work on having a more realistic pitch for the 737  ;)