Foggy

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Foggy

Postby Immelman » Sun Jan 07, 2007 4:22 pm

This is my first real attempt at a composition.
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Re: Foggy

Postby Sytse » Sun Jan 07, 2007 6:22 pm

Looks nice. The colours could use some attention for better blending, but it's not too bad. But, why hide the plane in the corner?
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Re: Foggy

Postby Immelman » Sun Jan 07, 2007 6:36 pm

That came from paying too much attention to the small details.  I was thinking that it would look like the plane was higher, otherwise it might look too low.  I know, stupid.
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Re: Foggy

Postby matt2190 » Sun Jan 07, 2007 6:36 pm

That looks very nice.
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Re: Foggy

Postby Jared » Sun Jan 07, 2007 9:38 pm

looking pretty good
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Re: Foggy

Postby beaky » Tue Jan 09, 2007 8:17 am

I think it's fine.
Composition means sometimes having your subject off-center; the hills in the opposite corner balance it nicely.
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