Quick (First) Edit!

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Quick (First) Edit!

Postby born_2_fly » Sun Dec 03, 2006 2:33 pm

I just did a little edit of one of Omag's great shots. I never really do editing but got bored so tried it. Please be critcal otherwise I will suck forever  ;D

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Re: Quick (First) Edit!

Postby cspyro21 » Sun Dec 03, 2006 2:54 pm

I like what you've done with the blur in the background, that's great! But the heatblur effect you've used isn't too good, also heatblur wouldn't curve down towards the runway (it'd be relatively straight). If you're using photoshop, use the blur tool and blur where the heat blur would be. 8)
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Re: Quick (First) Edit!

Postby born_2_fly » Sun Dec 03, 2006 3:01 pm

I like what you've done with the blur in the background, that's great!



Thanks  ;D

And I agree with you on the heatblur! That was the one bit I was unsure on, will try just the blur next time, and see if it comes out better.

Cheers  ;D

Alex


EDIT: Hmm, is this better?
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Re: Quick (First) Edit!

Postby cspyro21 » Mon Dec 04, 2006 2:48 pm

EDIT: Hmm, is this better?


Very much so Alex - Brilliant!!  [smiley=shocked.gif]
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Re: Quick (First) Edit!

Postby born_2_fly » Mon Dec 04, 2006 3:34 pm

Thanks!  :D
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Re: Quick (First) Edit!

Postby Sytse » Mon Dec 04, 2006 4:11 pm

The 2nd is nice, but you should get rid of the lens flare, or at least fade it.
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Re: Quick (First) Edit!

Postby CSM » Tue Dec 05, 2006 2:36 am

ahhhhhh i know what the first one is, its one of those new vtol 737s :-? ;D
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Re: Quick (First) Edit!

Postby flyboy_14 » Wed Dec 06, 2006 8:29 pm

Nice work on the second one, but try to blur the edges of the Jetwash into the rest of the picture. And don't be so aggresive with the jetwash, it would not be that visible in a photo.
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