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SideWinder9's Gallery Attempt

Postby SideWinder9 » Sun Aug 27, 2006 11:42 am

Here's my first attempt! :)

A Frontier A319 Taking off from Denver...

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Re: SideWinder9's Gallery Attempt

Postby MOUSY » Sun Aug 27, 2006 2:39 pm

Simple and too the point. Background is lacking, but the amazing detial on this plane and its paint makes up for it. My only suggestion is I would have taken this shot from the rear-left instead to get a better view of what looks like an incredibly detailed tail. I'll say yes.... but only just.
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Re: SideWinder9's Gallery Attempt

Postby lilley91 » Sun Aug 27, 2006 3:06 pm

very close i will say that, but im afraid its a no from me

the aircraft is very very detailed!!! (if you wouldnt mind - where from?)
but i dont think you are showing it in teh best way, i love the lighting on teh aircrfat, but the background is severely lacking, BUT this can be a good thing if you get it rigt, and i havent been able to get it right that way yet so i cant tell you how as of yet, and ive only seen 2 shots that have done that for me.

anyway

the background needs some work, and a better angle to show the greatness of the plane and your there


if only i could put this into use!!!!

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Re: SideWinder9's Gallery Attempt

Postby Harold » Sun Aug 27, 2006 3:56 pm

Cool shot of a gorgeous plane with a lot of detail and look at that sky!

But to me it just lacks the X-Factor ... maybe it needs a little more perspective?
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Re: SideWinder9's Gallery Attempt

Postby Ecko » Sun Aug 27, 2006 5:10 pm

Thumbs up from me! 8)
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Re: SideWinder9's Gallery Attempt

Postby flymo » Mon Aug 28, 2006 4:54 am

i dnt know what you lot are talking about.
that is a stunning shot. got a bit yeeeep from me
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Re: SideWinder9's Gallery Attempt

Postby Hai Perso Coyone? » Mon Aug 28, 2006 5:43 am

I love it ;) ;)
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Re: SideWinder9's Gallery Attempt

Postby killerbunny » Mon Aug 28, 2006 5:47 am

I voted yes :)

Sure, the background isn't the most thrilling out there, but IMHO a very detailed background wouldn't add much to the overall quality of the pic. This background has a nice colour and its not too crowded with detail,  this way the focus remains on the plane.  An example of less is more ;)
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Re: SideWinder9's Gallery Attempt

Postby Mees » Mon Aug 28, 2006 7:38 am

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Re: SideWinder9's Gallery Attempt

Postby Mictheslik » Mon Aug 28, 2006 2:12 pm

Sorry, but it's a close no from me....the plane and lighting are nice, but it lacks background and the clouds dont look right.

Rated I would give it a 7/10

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Re: SideWinder9's Gallery Attempt

Postby Sir_Jon » Mon Aug 28, 2006 6:22 pm

Yes from me.
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Re: SideWinder9's Gallery Attempt

Postby Sniperman » Mon Aug 28, 2006 6:25 pm

Had to say no, the plane looks great but nothing else really jumps out at me, the angle also is one you see in tons of screenshots (no offense) i would hope you would take all these comments that me and others have posted and im sure you could produce a gallery caliber shot ;)
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Re: SideWinder9's Gallery Attempt

Postby Souichiro » Mon Aug 28, 2006 6:26 pm

But to me it just lacks the X-Factor ... maybe it needs a little more perspective?


Nah it's the tail!!

The tails on these things are waht makes the so special! Also they are brilliantly done for FS... getting a glimpse of sunlight on the tail and the frontier + a runway lit up and You've got a superb shot I think..

The shot is good but I think with this plane and setting you could have done much better so a no from me
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Re: SideWinder9's Gallery Attempt

Postby Clipper » Tue Aug 29, 2006 2:18 pm

I think this is a crisp, highly detailed shot and should definately make the Gallery. A resounding YES from me.. :)
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Re: SideWinder9's Gallery Attempt

Postby SideWinder9 » Tue Aug 29, 2006 6:38 pm

Thanks Everyone! ;D :D
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