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Me and my friend made this for school, i'm not sure if this goes here...

www.chinesehobbies.weebly.com

Could anyone please tell me how it is

I especially like the big, bold, ERROR, the requested URL could not be retrieved.  ;D

Might, want to check that out.

I especially like the big, bold, ERROR, the requested URL could not be retrieved.  ;D

Might, want to check that out.

Works for me might want to try this : http://chinesehobbies.weebly.com
It's the redirected address

Pretty good, I only had time for a look at the front page, but otherwise, fine. I would recommend removing the THNX!!!!!! and typing Thanks! to make it a bit more professional.  ;)

Pretty good, I only had time for a look at the front page, but otherwise, fine. I would recommend removing the THNX!!!!!! and typing Thanks! to make it a bit more professional.  ;)

Lol oliver put that in

And i forgot the pass for weebly so i can't change it...yet

Can more people please check my site out i spent hours on it ghetting and typing codes

Looks great, nice clean layout! Works fine on OS X Safari!

Looks great, nice clean layout! Works fine on OS X Safari!

and it's funny you can't make the site with safari  ;D but on the front page of the site it has a screen shot of a site being edited with safari

A pretty interesting site.

A few typos here and there (The bullet game on older games, 'ocollected' instead of 'collected'. What is the 'cor' bit, too?)


As for the blocking for hatemail... I hope that wouldn't be an IP ban, because that would be amazingly easy to get around  :P

[quote]A pretty interesting site.

A few typos here and there (The bullet game on older games, 'ocollected' instead of 'collected'. What is the 'cor' bit, too?)


As for the blocking for hatemail... I hope that wouldn't be an IP ban, because that would be amazingly easy to get around

Very interesting site. Nicely laid out but I agree with the other comments. I suggest you pay more attention to the spelling & grammar especially as this is a school project. Running a spell check might be useful but note that it will not pick up words used incorrectly or in the wrong context. You could do with a decent proof-reader to go through & correct what you already have.

Here's a few examples from a quick glance;
machineman9 wrote:

A few typos here and there (The bullet game on older games, 'ocollected' instead of 'collected'. What is the 'cor' bit, too?)

I assume this should be corps as in Army Corps. pass time in the same paragraph should be pastime.

Note that hobby (not hobbie) is the singular of hobbies. The word Chinese should start with a capital C.

Hope this is some help.

machineman9 wrote:

A few typos here and there (The bullet game on older games, 'ocollected' instead of 'collected'. What is the 'cor' bit, too?)

I assume this should be corps as in Army Corps. pass time in the same paragraph should be pastime.

Atleast it isn't the ever popular 'core' or 'corpse' as I have heard people say at cadets in the past  ;D

i liked the ping pong games
very interesting

Pretty cool.