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Postby Ivan » Sun May 01, 2011 1:48 pm

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Re: Go ahead and rate it...

Postby B-Valvs » Tue May 03, 2011 9:50 pm

Here we go:

Let's start with the angle. It's okay. You have the majority of the aircraft in the shot and it's not too zoomed out. Since this shot focuses completely on the plane and not much else, I would have dropped the angle down a bit in order to give the aircraft a more powerful presence in the shot.

The one thing that I really don't like is that the shot is 33% gray ground. It's not very interesting to look at. Again, dropping the angle would eliminate some of the ground and give you more sky, which is more interesting to look at. That is, if there is some interesting weather. Try experimenting with different weather themes in order to make more attractive and interesting backgrounds.

Overall this is a nice screenshot. It's all subjective, but I think you have a good base and a good idea that can be added to to make it even better.

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Re: Go ahead and rate it...

Postby CHUCK79 » Wed May 04, 2011 9:44 am

I agree with B-valvs.
It's too late to change the angle.......but, what you can do is crop some of the foreground out....
https://www.simviation.com/phpupload/upl ... 584615.jpg
B-valvs also mentioned weather......some clouds would definately add to the shot ;)
Great shot though....keep it up ;)
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Re: Go ahead and rate it...

Postby Skunkworks » Wed May 04, 2011 7:14 pm

I think B-Valvs and Chuck are hitting the nail on the head with their critique of your very nice screenie!
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Re: Go ahead and rate it...

Postby DowninFlames » Mon May 23, 2011 10:05 pm

^^  linhely == Spammer

Nice shot, concur with the others. Perhaps one of the engines starting up/spinning would make it cooler too.
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