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Critique Pt.2

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 2:09 pm
by Tom...
Scene as the lighting in my last shot was the thing that most people though was really good i decided to go out and get another shot with the emphisis on lighting

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Re: Critique Pt.2

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 2:30 pm
by Ashar
The plane's way too orange for my taste :-/

Unfortunately, I'm not a big fan of psychedelic colors :-/

Re: Critique Pt.2

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 2:40 pm
by cspyro21
The lighting isn't too realistic, but it makes for a VERY nice edit indeed! 8-) 8-)

Re: Critique Pt.2

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 4:45 pm
by spitfire boy
If this was an edit intended to look real, it'd score badly. However, it clearly isn't intended to look real, so it scores very highly... ;D

Seriously, I love the colours in this; the exaggeration is what makes it for me. :D

Re: Critique Pt.2

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 8:49 pm
by JLangholzJ
I don;t use photoshop, istead i prefer gimp, but thier relatively that same.

From the looks of your previous pictures, you are editing the whole picture at once. Why not try adding several layers so you could edit the plane and clouds sperately (as far as shading goes)

I'll peck away at your first one, and see what I come up with.

either way, they both look good :)

Re: Critique Pt.2

PostPosted: Mon Jan 14, 2008 9:24 pm
by Clipper
Interesting and intense. (first one) IMO, Would be even better if the tail was more visible.