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Postby J. » Wed Dec 26, 2007 3:23 pm

rate/rape/slash/gash what do you think?

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Re: Rate this pic

Postby spitfire boy » Wed Dec 26, 2007 3:47 pm

Wonderful looking aircraft and very interesting background to boot; very nice indeed!

I have one small niggle though; there's alot of tarmac near the bottom that adds nothing to the shot. Id've got rid of it either by cropping it off or by using fsrecorder to pan the camera up a bit.

Still a good solid 9. :D
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Re: Rate this pic

Postby J. » Wed Dec 26, 2007 4:47 pm

Wonderful looking aircraft and very interesting background to boot; very nice indeed!

I have one small niggle though; there's alot of tarmac near the bottom that adds nothing to the shot. Id've got rid of it either by cropping it off or by using fsrecorder to pan the camera up a bit.

Still a good solid 9. :D


thanks, and leaving the tarmac in adds depth, cropping the image is no fun.
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Re: Rate this pic

Postby aussiewannabe » Wed Dec 26, 2007 4:58 pm

I agree with spitfire boy, but I sure love the detail above the AC. Not too keen on flat tires though :(

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Re: Rate this pic

Postby a1 » Wed Dec 26, 2007 7:31 pm

The ground sure adds depth.


9.5


Very good. More sky or color would have been nice. ;)
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Re: Rate this pic

Postby Clipper » Thu Dec 27, 2007 11:49 am

8.5 Lots of atmosphere and "aviation" feel to this great pic. Very solid textures, composition and color. Missing perhaps a bit more to look at, just something to finish of the visuals. Really impressive though.
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Re: Rate this pic

Postby krigl » Thu Dec 27, 2007 2:26 pm

Very nice use of some great scenery. Looks very natural, with the sunlight and shadow and great textures though it could use a bit more detail for a realistic 'on the ground' shot. I don't like the tarmac either, I'd have closed in and moved up using Wheelcam and the ctrl plus + keys. Not sure if it's quite a gallery pic though:  8.75
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Re: Rate this pic

Postby PD87 » Thu Dec 27, 2007 2:29 pm

I give it a 9, because you cut off the wing! 8-)
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Re: Rate this pic

Postby Fly2e » Thu Dec 27, 2007 4:54 pm

Boring...
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Re: Rate this pic

Postby J. » Thu Dec 27, 2007 5:32 pm

Boring...


care to explain why?

everyone else has said 9 and you said boring? reasons?
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Re: Rate this pic

Postby spitfire boy » Thu Dec 27, 2007 6:01 pm

Boring...


care to explain why?

everyone else has said 9 and you said boring? reasons?


Calm down mate. We don't want a row.

Maybe you're not aware of this, but posting your shots in the studio will attract harsher comments to your shots; because that's one of the main reasons the studio was created in the first place; to allow screenartists a place to recieve harsh constructive criticism.One of the main things that must be stressed is that absoluteley none of this criticism should be taken personally.
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Re: Rate this pic

Postby J. » Thu Dec 27, 2007 6:24 pm

harsh crit i agree with, but giving no reasoning is just silly. If their was reasoning behind what he said then woop te doo yay their we go, im sure if anyone else had just put "boring" on his shots and no reason he would be slightly peeved.
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Re: Rate this pic

Postby Flying Buckeye » Thu Dec 27, 2007 9:00 pm

9.5 It needs some more visible sky over the hangar.
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Re: Rate this pic

Postby Fly2e » Fri Dec 28, 2007 11:08 am

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Re: Rate this pic

Postby J. » Fri Dec 28, 2007 11:17 am

thanks for your input Dave, It's not that i was offended by what you put, just an explanation helps things along a bit and helps people improve, as people have said, thats why the Studio is here
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