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Rate This

Posted:
Fri Nov 23, 2007 2:01 am
by Mazza
My first pic in The workshop.
Hope you like:

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Fri Nov 23, 2007 2:18 am
by Ashar
6...The aircraft is too far away plus the G-effects really make it hard to see the aircraft...The clouds don't look to good too...Sorry :-/
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Fri Nov 23, 2007 2:38 am
by ThomasKaira
6.5 from here. The scenery is bland, the sky is bland, the aircraft looks compressed, but it looks good doing what it is doing, so a small bonus there.
Not the worst, but not the best. :-/
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Fri Nov 23, 2007 3:10 am
by Slotback
Turn up your Anti-Aliasing, zoom in allittle, and try adding a nice backdrop. Maybe more clouds or mountains or something.

4/10.
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Fri Nov 23, 2007 3:46 am
by Mitch.
Its a 5 from me, definetly room for improvement.

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Fri Nov 23, 2007 3:47 am
by Mazza
Turn up your Anti-Aliasing, zoom in allittle, and try adding a nice backdrop. Maybe more clouds or mountains or something.

4/10.
Yeah i know that the backround is bad(it's one of my old shots)
And Ashar G-effects are not on :-?
And My AA is on Full..... It's the sim(i've got 2002) and my Ram(it's tiny 256mb

)
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Fri Nov 23, 2007 4:56 am
by cspyro21
4.5/10
All the criticisms above, but also you're image is 44kb / 100 (hence why the aircraft looks like the AA isn't turned on probably) - remember, each shot can be up to 100kb

Keep at it though, you'll never improve if you don't keep screenshooting! 8-)
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Fri Nov 23, 2007 5:00 am
by Clipper
6 Good advice from Cspyro here, keep at it, look carefully at others shots. Look in the Gallery, see what constitutes a brilliant shot and try to duplicate some of the techniques you see. Ask questions here at the Studio, everyone is here to help, advise and critique.
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Fri Nov 23, 2007 9:37 am
by PD87
nice effect, but there isnt anything I can say that hasnt already been said above. practice!

2
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Fri Nov 23, 2007 10:35 am
by mrjake2002
Its a 4 from me I'm afraid. Same reasons as above. ;)
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Fri Nov 23, 2007 10:43 am
by a1
5
Needs more detail and AA. Some nice coloring wouldn't hurt.

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Fri Nov 23, 2007 12:18 pm
by Ashar
And Ashar G-effects are not on :-?
And My AA is on Full..... It's the sim(i've got 2002) and my Ram(it's tiny 256mb

)
What's the white stuff then?

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Fri Nov 23, 2007 10:50 pm
by Mazza
And Ashar G-effects are not on :-?
And My AA is on Full..... It's the sim(i've got 2002) and my Ram(it's tiny 256mb

)
What's the white stuff then?

That's the vapor that comes on with the lights
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Fri Nov 23, 2007 11:03 pm
by Ashar
And Ashar G-effects are not on :-?
And My AA is on Full..... It's the sim(i've got 2002) and my Ram(it's tiny 256mb

)
What's the white stuff then?

That's the vapor that comes on with the lights
It's still a G-effect

It's bound to a light key rather than being XML coded

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Fri Nov 23, 2007 11:36 pm
by Mazza
And Ashar G-effects are not on :-?
And My AA is on Full..... It's the sim(i've got 2002) and my Ram(it's tiny 256mb

)
What's the white stuff then?

That's the vapor that comes on with the lights
It's still a G-effect

It's bound to a light key rather than being XML coded

Actually it is but i did not know where to put the XML files

I don't care
