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Rip the JC entry to shreds!

PostPosted: Mon Oct 01, 2007 11:22 pm
by ThomasKaira
Image

Ready...

And...

Go.

Re: Rip the JC entry to shreds!

PostPosted: Tue Oct 02, 2007 1:49 am
by spitfire boy
The nose of the aircraft is too dark and the eye is drawn away from it. Plus the port engines are almost indistinguishable from the port wing due to their both being too dark.

Still quite nice though. ;)

Re: Rip the JC entry to shreds!

PostPosted: Fri Oct 05, 2007 8:58 pm
by ThomasKaira
Thanks for the advice, spit, I'll take that into account.

Anyone else want a whack at it? (Late, yes, but I'm ambitious, and want to learn all I can about this hobby) ;)

Re: Rip the JC entry to shreds!

PostPosted: Sun Oct 07, 2007 10:43 pm
by aussiewannabe
I agree with spitfire, although I really like what's below and slightly left of the right engines. What exactly is that? It intrigues me!

Re: Rip the JC entry to shreds!

PostPosted: Mon Oct 08, 2007 8:39 am
by Fly2e
Lighting is bad and the wings are cut off!
Should have taken the shot from the other side as the sun light would have reflected off the aircraft much better making the shot more dramatic!

Far too much headroom in front of the aircraft thus making the composition unbalanced.

Dave

Re: Rip the JC entry to shreds!

PostPosted: Tue Oct 09, 2007 5:04 am
by Clipper
I think Dave really hit it precisely. I personally don't have issue with wings cut off, but placing the sun behind the pic as opposed to in front would have really increased the contrast and color depth here. One more thing, the little row of cumulus at the bottom of the cloud cover look a bit unrealistic. In truth, I think there's a lot to like in this pic. The scenery is great, and the overall aircraft perspective creates a nice mood. With lighting changes and a bit of weather modifications, this would be an even better pic.  :)